Is my prologue good? 10 points to best advice (PLEASE HELP)?

WOW! I've read a lot of prologues on here, but so far yours is the best. I think it gives the best detail and it gives the best history of the main character. You did a great job with this and the only thing I noticed was there were only a couple of small punctuation mistakes. All you have to do is look over it, fix it and you're good to go!