Monday, January 16, 2012

Is there anything wrong with this sentence? 10 points!!??

The sentence "A pillar standing tall and erect symbolizing the strong foundation. A concept of blue elicit a simple yet elegant sense surrounding the area.Behind the transparency design, it has clearly revealed a life philosophy, which also ent the architectural design in exhibiting virtue of aptitude development to an unlimited extent." Is there anything wrong with this sentence? Need help for my school project. please amend to the BEST you can, 10 points!!! thanks.

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