Untitled; for the same girlfriend. Like it?

It is really good, and I think anyone who got this poem would be pleased. It is very pionate. Lots of emotions run through such few words. My one and only criticism is that in the first 4 lines, you rhyme twice (every other, which is actually difficult to do) and in the rest of the poem you did not. I think that if you changed it to anything else, though, it would take away the poem, so keep it the way it is.